1不出现语法错误。2主次信息点不能用一个句子表达，3同类信息点用并列句或复合句表达，4不要乱用and(这点考生常犯)1不出现语法错误，!我很苦恼。我买了一本英语书,可是我不知道它的意思，我想,也许我要好好的学习英语，只有这样我才能学会很多知识，Todayissunny。Iatesomenoodles,meatandvegetables。
Iliketheseverymuch。ilikeenglish,itisinteresting,istudyiteveryday。myteacherhelpsmealotnowicanwriteanenglishcomposition!。Imagoodgirl。Ilikereading。Ilikedrawing。
Ihavemanyfriends。Mynameis[yourname]andImtenyearsold。IminGrade4at[nameofyourschool]。Ihaveblackhairandbrowneyes。todayissunny。igoshoppingwithmyfriends。wewenttoshoppingmall。
theyarecolorfulandbeautiful。myfriendandIMynameisJohnandIhaveafriend。MygoodfriendisTommy。Heisshorterandthinnerthanme。AttheBeachThesandfeelssoftandwarmunderthesun。
Swimmingissocomfortable。Allowmetointroducemyfriend,John。Heisatallandhandsomeyoungmanwithapassionforsports。Iwassickyesterday。Ididntgotoschool。Mymothertookmetothehospitaltoseeadoctor。
Imannoyed。IboughtanEnglishbook,butIdontknowwhatitmeans，Idontunderstandatall。thisismyday,andimgonnabeok，theskyisclear,thebirdsaresinging。theflowersandprettygirlsareeverywhere。